Cold, Black...Dark by Donna Lynn (Rated R)

[DonnaLynn]

Cold, Black…Dark
Author: Donna Lynn
E-mail: [e-mail]
Status: Incomplete
Word Count: 2,948
Size: 19KB
Category: Angst/Romance
Spoilers/Rumors: General season 1 | Alternate Universe, Future fic
Season: 1
Rating: R
Content Warning: Language, violence and mild adult content.
Summary: John is forced to make a decision when he and Teyla are trapped in a sunken puddle jumper.
Author's Note: When you read this you are going to think of the scene from the movie "The Abyss" and say, "That's similar to that scene where Lindsey died!" and yes, it's similar but not the same. I had watched "The Abyss" one day and I've always wanted to try and write a story based off that scene but I didn't have the write pairing for it and then I did! Like I said it doesn't go exactly like the scene in the movie but it's similar so if you've got a problem with that then don't read it! There are some graphic words and I put violence because I think it merited it. The mild adult content? I know what you're thinking…Donna Lynn…mild adult content? That's an oxymoron! There is no sex but I put the adult content just in case. People on Fanfiction.net can be stupid and not pay attention to warnings and get offended when they read something they don't like. You people piss me off! I'm done rambling now…
Pairing: John/Teyla
Disclaimer: The characters of "Stargate: Atlantis" do not belong to me. So DO NOT sue me!

NEW STORY!! Here's the link to check it out!

sg-atlantis.org/fanfics/viewstory.php?sid=246

Donna Lynn

[Duerre]

And I add: sheyla.leviosa.org/fanfiction/index.php?go=Fiction&story=8
Thanks again Donna!!

[DonnaLynn]

I've been getting a lot of heat about this story I've been semi-accused of plagerism since the story is so very similar to a scene from the movie The Abyss which I'm sure everyone has seen. If you haven't you should it!

Anyway, everywhere I have posted the story but one place I have tagged an author's note stating the story was similar to a scene from the movie. The one place I didn't post it at I no longer post at and never ever will in my life again. I got treated like a child and the person went way off the deep end about the situation. But, considering it was their site I didn't argue because they were going to allow me to post the story once I put the note. But after how they treated me I had a very bad taste in my mouth I was not very happy with the way I was treated to say the least.

I just wanted to make it very clear to any reader that I DID BORROW the scene and some of the dialogue but I did change things to keep it from being plagerism or some kind of copyright violation. If I have offended anyone please except my humblest apologies

Donna Lynn

[Duerre]

I never saw "The Abyss" but I think that if you have told what your inspiration is, there is no problems!!
People can be easily choked sometimes!!